Friday, March 30, 2012

Springy

A haiku for spring:
seventeen syllables of
bare feet and new growth.

4 comments:

  1. What about our trips
    through parks and urban deluge?
    Without which I wilt?

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  2. Our trips always trip
    my happiness triggers, O,
    anonymous one.

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  3. I appreciate
    your use of "deluge"-like words
    as always, dear friend.

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  4. Will I ever stop
    writing dorky haiku posts
    in comment sections?

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